Autobiography1-draft two

I am Yun-Ling Yan, a seventeen-year-old happy girl from Kaohsiung. I have an English name called Giovana. There are four people in my sweet family. My father is a gernerous and a disinterested policeman. When I was child, he cared about my schoolwork very much. My mother is a housewife and she is good at cooking. The dishes she cooks are delicious and tasty. My older brother studies in Department Electrical Engineering at the Southern University. So, he is always a good example to me that I have learn from him more. I love the warm and comfortable feeling of my family. I must say I am very lucky enough to grow in such a great home.

My favorite hobby is swimming. It makes my body and physical strong. When I was five grades at elementary school, my older brother swam very well. Since then, I began to learn swimming conscientiously. Whenever I have free time, I always go swimming with my family. On the other hand, I also like some quiet activities like singing songs and handicraft. I think they are interesting activities very much.