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TV Program
To choose the program carefully is important. Even though TV is to supply the most important information and entertainment channels. It maybe have some disadvantages. Some of programs are full of violence and lust. And they have unhealthy influence for teenagers. Spending too much time also do harm to eyesight. For this reason, we should choose the TV programs to good for our bodies and mind. The most important one is don’t become a couch potato.
A Computer
Computer plays an important role in our every day life. They can help students hand in homework. Also it help people to deliver imformation in time. When you turn on the computer, you must fall in love with it. However, you have to remind yourself that don’t sit in front of the computer for a long time. Most of parents don’t like children too depend on computers. Especially to discuss on the BBS is very waste time.

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TV Program
Some of programs full of violence and lust are have unhealthy influence for teenagers.
full of 前面要加are
are 跟have 不能放一起
我覺得這一句分成兩句寫會好一點!
some of programs are full of violence and lust. And they have unhealthy influence for teenagers.
Computer
computer前加a或在後面加s
(1) TV ProgramTo choose the program carefully is important.
→To choose the TV program carefully...
(2) Spending too much time also do harm to eyesight.
→also doing..
(3) we should choose the TV programs to good for our bodies and mind.
→ we should choose the TV programs which are good for our bodies and mind.
(4) A ComputerComputer ??
(5) to discuss on the BBS is very waste time→
discuss on the BBS is very wasteful time.
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