A Report Card-Draft two
Someday, John' father is sitting on the sofa in the living room. John is standing next to his father. His father holds a report card from John's school.Looking a report card, the father is shaking with angry.Then tells his son if he can surpass himself the first in is his class.Finally his son thanks his father and says he can study harder more than before.
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His father holds a report card from John's school.
→改成which is sent 或 sending
Then tells his son if he can surpass himself the first in is his class.
→is 去掉
Finally his son thanks
→his son 改成John
John' father is sitting on the sofa in the living room.
→John's
Looking a report card, the father is shaking with angry.
→his father
Finally his son thanks his father and says he can study harder more than before.
→claims that
His father holds a report card from John's school.
→改成which is sent 或 sending
Then tells his son if he can surpass himself the first in is his class.
→is 去掉
Finally his son thanks
→his son 改成John
His father holds a report card from John's school.
→改成which is sent 或 sending
Then tells his son if he can surpass himself the first in is his class.
→is 去掉
Finally his son thanks
→his son 改成John
One day, John' father sat on the sofa in the living room. John stood next to his father. His father held a report card sent from John's school. Looking at the report card, John's father shook with angry and then told John if he could surpass himself the first in is his class. Finally, John thanked his father and said he could study harder than before.
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---told John if he could surpass himself the first in is his class.
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