An Unforgettable Experience-draft one

Almost everyone has an unforgettable experience during their liftime and I am no exception. The most memorable experience in my life happened on my 17th birthday. A month before my 17th birthday, I was complaining to my sister about not having any new sweaters, so I asked her for one, but she told me, Sorry, I don't have spare money to buy you a new sweater. I was very disspointed when she said that, so I continued to wear my old sweater. A month later, it was my birthday day. I remembered it was cold that saw that my sister gave me a big gift box and was shocked to see a sweater inside. The sweater had my name sewn in the center and my favorite graphics were also sewn in a circle around my name. When I saw the gift, it brought tears to my eyes, because it was specially made for me. During that night, I kept holding the sweater while I fell asleep. My dear sister was so sweet and kind to me. I could never forget that moment when I was emotionally moved by my sister's thoughtfulness.