Autobiography1-draft two

I am Yun-Ling Yan, a seventeen-year-old happy girl from Kaohsiung. I have an English name called Giovana. There are four people in my sweet family. My father is a gernerous and a disinterested policeman. When I was child, he cared about my schoolwork very much. My mother is a housewife and she is good at cooking. The dishes she cooks are delicious and tasty. My older brother studies in Department Electrical Engineering at the Southern University. So, he is always a good example to me that I have learn from him more. I love the warm and comfortable feeling of my family. I must say I am very lucky enough to grow in such a great home.

My favorite hobby is swimming. It makes my body and physical strong. When I was five grades at elementary school, my older brother swam very well. Since then, I began to learn swimming conscientiously. Whenever I have free time, I always go swimming with my family. On the other hand, I also like some quiet activities like singing songs and handicraft. I think they are interesting activities very much.

Autobiography1-draft one

I am Yun-Ling Yan, a seventeen-year-old happy girl from Kaohsiung. I have an English name called Giovana. There are four people in my sweet family. My father is gernerous and a disinterested policeman. When I was child, he caring about my schoolwork very much. My mother is a housewife and she is good at cooking, the dishes she cooks are delicious and tasty. My older brother studies in Department Electrical Engineering at the Southern University. So, he is always a good example to me that I have learn from him more. I love the warm and comfortable feeling of my family. I must say I am very lucky enough to grow in such a great home.

My favorite hobby is swimming. It makes my body and physical strong. When I was five grades at elementary school, my older brother swims very well. Since then, I began to learn swimming conscientiously. Whenever I have free time, I always go swimming with my family. On the other hand, I also like some quiet activities like singing songs and handicraft.

Translation-draft two

TV Program
To choose the TV program carefully is important. Even though TV is to supply the most important information and entertainment channels. It maybe have some disadvantages. Some of programs are full of violence and lust. And they have unhealthy influence for teenagers. Spending too much time also doing harm to eyesight. For this reason, we should choose the TV programs which are good for our bodies and mind. The most important one is don’t become a couch potato.
A Computer
Computer plays an important role in our every day life. They can help students hand in homework. Also it help people to deliver imformation in time. When you turn on the computer, you must fall in love with it. However, you have to remind yourself that don’t sit in front of the computer for a long time. Most of parents don’t like children too depend on computers. Especially to discuss on the BBS is very wasteful time.