Wednesday, December 20, 2006

An Embarrassing Experience-draft one

One evening I went out alone and wandered from street to street. At midnight I began to cross a bridge. The night air was cold and damp. A low mist hung over the river and the street lamp gave little light.I was anxious to get home. When I reached the middle of the bridge I thought I could hear someone approaching behind me. I looked back, but could make out only the form of a man dressed in a large overcoat. The sound continued and I began walking more quickly. Then I slowed down again, ashamed of myself for acting so foolishly.Yes, indeed, there was no need to fear at all. It was my father coming to look for me.

4 Comments:

At 6:44 AM , Blogger 飛奇 said...

"At midnight I began to cross a bridge."
感覺上用begin好像不太適合

 
At 12:45 AM , Blogger 平井" said...

I looked back, but could make out only the form of a man dressed in a large overcoat.
but 的後面要加一個I

 
At 3:31 AM , Blogger 郭包子 said...

When I reached the middle of the bridge I thought I could hear someone approaching behind me.
句子中間要","哦!

 
At 7:44 PM , Blogger GIGI said...

The sound continued and I began walking more quickly.
這句話看不太懂
那個sound 是什麼意思
是聲音嗎
如果是用voice比較好!

 

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